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Cometstar leaped up onto high rock to make the announcements.
"We have lost five good cats. Foxpaw, Windpaw, Quietbreath, Copperclick and Hailpaw." She meowed, her voice wavering at the long list. "They will be missed and we hold vigil for them tonight" the young cats voice cracked from the strain of these past few months and with a flick of her tail to dismiss the meeting, she padded out into the forest.
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Cometstar looked at her reflection in the water, eyes dull and fur matted. She had been made leader at just 18 moons and she had struggled with the stress from day one. She knew why. She was never meant to be the leader of Sunclan. Because both her parents had been murderous rogues, she had never received her nine lives. She was just as vulnerable as her clanmates. She looked up at the skies. "Dear spirits help me" she murmured but she heard no reply, only sensed rejection, that the spirits had turned their back on her. She hissed in frustration. "Why do you judge me by my parents" She spat at the skies, eyes glittering. "Then hear me now, I no longer honour you as my ancestors, you are NOTHING to me!" she screamed at the sky and in the distance thunder boomed. She heard a voice in her head. "You will pay dearly for that insult Cometflash" it whispered in a cold hard voice and Cometstar shivered. She was no longer a leader, no longer had the blessing of spirits, not that she ever had.
"I don't care" Cometflash mumbled sadly, before freezing as she heard a snarl from behind her. A fox, a vixen, stepped out of the bushes, obviously alerted by her yells. You will pay dearly for that insult Cometflash the spirits words coursed through her mind. Cometstar backed up against a tree, snarling. She may not be a leader, and she may not honour the spirits, but she still must protect my clan. She leaped and scored her claws down the foxes side. It yelped and nipped her tail but the warrior barely felt the pain. She felt alive. More alive than she'd ever felt in these past moons. She was Cometstar, warrior of Sunclan. She jumped again and landed on the vixens back, digging her fangs into its neck. It screamed and threw her off before grabbing her by the throat and shaking Cometstar violently. Pain coursed through her as the fox dropped her and leaned in. She layed still for a moment, fighting the pain before leaping up and biting the jugular vein along its throat. Hard. She must defend her clan.
The fox yelped at the sudden attack and thrashed on the ground, trying to dislodge the cat but it couldn't and almost gracefully, it slowed down...to a stop. Cometstar removed her fangs as blood dripped from her mouth and the scent clogged up her nose. She looked up and the pain from her throat made it hard. She winced and looked around her. Her own blood was running freely, and she could almost feel her strength running with it. Staggering, the silvery grey she cat stumbled from the fox carcass, strangely calm. She was going to die. Away from her clanmates, with none to ease her pain and without mourners. It was almost better this way. She stumbled away, leaving a trail of blood behind her as the ex Sunclan leader made her slow journey to the edge of Sunclan territory. The sun beat down, burning the fur along her back with vicious heat.
The she cat barely noticed as she crossed the borders, now in the territory of rogues and loners. It was a hot day and heat shimmered off the ground, not helping her already blurred vision. She could feel flies settling on the raw flesh of her savaged throat and neck but she barely had the strength to shake them away. She caught her paw on a stone and stumbled, but got back to her paws again. She must not die near Sunclan, it was best they thought she had slipped away alive than suffered this. She glanced back up at the sun, and could almost feel the spirits many eyes burning into her soul, feeling no pity, showing no mercy. Cometstar looked back down and with a deep breath, she collapsed, eyelids fluttering as many thoughts ran through her mind.
She may not have been destined to have nine lives.
She may not have the spirits blessing.
She may be frowned upon by the spirits.
She may not go to the spirits hunting grounds for peace.
But one thing was for sure.
She had kept to the most important vow of a warrior.
She had defended her clan with her life.
And now at peace, Cometflash slipped away, never again to fight for her clan.
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God I cried when I wrote the ending
Sorry guys but I'm just not active enough. I haven't got enough time for this group along with everything else. But Gingerpelt my loyal deputy shall take over and i know I am leaving Sunclan in safe paws. Sorry guys, and farewell Sunclan, we had some nice memories.
~catz4ever
"We have lost five good cats. Foxpaw, Windpaw, Quietbreath, Copperclick and Hailpaw." She meowed, her voice wavering at the long list. "They will be missed and we hold vigil for them tonight" the young cats voice cracked from the strain of these past few months and with a flick of her tail to dismiss the meeting, she padded out into the forest.
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Cometstar looked at her reflection in the water, eyes dull and fur matted. She had been made leader at just 18 moons and she had struggled with the stress from day one. She knew why. She was never meant to be the leader of Sunclan. Because both her parents had been murderous rogues, she had never received her nine lives. She was just as vulnerable as her clanmates. She looked up at the skies. "Dear spirits help me" she murmured but she heard no reply, only sensed rejection, that the spirits had turned their back on her. She hissed in frustration. "Why do you judge me by my parents" She spat at the skies, eyes glittering. "Then hear me now, I no longer honour you as my ancestors, you are NOTHING to me!" she screamed at the sky and in the distance thunder boomed. She heard a voice in her head. "You will pay dearly for that insult Cometflash" it whispered in a cold hard voice and Cometstar shivered. She was no longer a leader, no longer had the blessing of spirits, not that she ever had.
"I don't care" Cometflash mumbled sadly, before freezing as she heard a snarl from behind her. A fox, a vixen, stepped out of the bushes, obviously alerted by her yells. You will pay dearly for that insult Cometflash the spirits words coursed through her mind. Cometstar backed up against a tree, snarling. She may not be a leader, and she may not honour the spirits, but she still must protect my clan. She leaped and scored her claws down the foxes side. It yelped and nipped her tail but the warrior barely felt the pain. She felt alive. More alive than she'd ever felt in these past moons. She was Cometstar, warrior of Sunclan. She jumped again and landed on the vixens back, digging her fangs into its neck. It screamed and threw her off before grabbing her by the throat and shaking Cometstar violently. Pain coursed through her as the fox dropped her and leaned in. She layed still for a moment, fighting the pain before leaping up and biting the jugular vein along its throat. Hard. She must defend her clan.
The fox yelped at the sudden attack and thrashed on the ground, trying to dislodge the cat but it couldn't and almost gracefully, it slowed down...to a stop. Cometstar removed her fangs as blood dripped from her mouth and the scent clogged up her nose. She looked up and the pain from her throat made it hard. She winced and looked around her. Her own blood was running freely, and she could almost feel her strength running with it. Staggering, the silvery grey she cat stumbled from the fox carcass, strangely calm. She was going to die. Away from her clanmates, with none to ease her pain and without mourners. It was almost better this way. She stumbled away, leaving a trail of blood behind her as the ex Sunclan leader made her slow journey to the edge of Sunclan territory. The sun beat down, burning the fur along her back with vicious heat.
The she cat barely noticed as she crossed the borders, now in the territory of rogues and loners. It was a hot day and heat shimmered off the ground, not helping her already blurred vision. She could feel flies settling on the raw flesh of her savaged throat and neck but she barely had the strength to shake them away. She caught her paw on a stone and stumbled, but got back to her paws again. She must not die near Sunclan, it was best they thought she had slipped away alive than suffered this. She glanced back up at the sun, and could almost feel the spirits many eyes burning into her soul, feeling no pity, showing no mercy. Cometstar looked back down and with a deep breath, she collapsed, eyelids fluttering as many thoughts ran through her mind.
She may not have been destined to have nine lives.
She may not have the spirits blessing.
She may be frowned upon by the spirits.
She may not go to the spirits hunting grounds for peace.
But one thing was for sure.
She had kept to the most important vow of a warrior.
She had defended her clan with her life.
And now at peace, Cometflash slipped away, never again to fight for her clan.
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God I cried when I wrote the ending
Sorry guys but I'm just not active enough. I haven't got enough time for this group along with everything else. But Gingerpelt my loyal deputy shall take over and i know I am leaving Sunclan in safe paws. Sorry guys, and farewell Sunclan, we had some nice memories.
~catz4ever
ALL Grassclan! READ!
OK, i know i haven't ben the most active leaders but we really need to get our butts moving! I know this isn't a good reason for a journal but i believe i'm the grassclan leader. So. Everyone from grassclan please just leave a small comment declaring that your still here and if you could maybe do a drawing that would be soo amazing! I'm going to work on getting myself active too so don't feel im getting you to work while i do nothing. I'm very sorry for my inactiveness and i now declare that at least every month i will post a picture to my main clan. (its grassclan if your confused!) So grassclan, lets make this clan strong again! Are you all
Warriors Contest Advertisement
~Nekoyasha12 (https://www.deviantart.com/nekoyasha12) asked us to to help advertise a warrior cats contest for the final book in the saga and because this is a warrior cat based rpg group I have decided to honor the request.
For anyone in this group looking for a warrior cats contest to check out or join please check out this journal here
http://nekoyasha12.deviantart.com/journal/Warrior-s-Contest-294188713
Best of luck to those who want to participate! ;3
:Nightclan announcment:
Tapperstar yowled out to the cats of Nightclan to gather once he was upon the Tree-stump, his collecting blue gaze shifting around the clearing as his clan-mates soon came into sight.
“As you all very well know, the season of New-leaf is finally upon us, with it bringing us the bountiful pleasure of prey. I know very well that you all are exhilarated for this season after such a harsh Leaf-bare . . . so as a heart-warming treat, I will be announcing a few new surprises,” He wagered, a small smirk appearing upon his striped maw.
“For the first New-leaf under my leadership, I will be announcing a competition, one in which
Nightclan Strikes and Punishment assignments
Okay it is now March 4th which means you guys had 3 extra days to give me a reason for not doing your patrol assignment.
These cats will all recieve strikes for failing to do the assignment, ask for extension, and not giving me a reason for not doing it. Three strikes and you are out of the clan.
Lilyfur
Nightpaw
Whaletail
Silentwhisper
Thornstar
Lizardpaw
Littlepaw
Brazenbolt
Mistycloud
Hawkpaw
Nightfrost
Darkglare
Crescentmoon
Dafttail
Thornshadow
TwoTone
PhantomHeart
Lightsoul
Moonkit
Starkit
Dragonkit
Palmkit
Punishment assignments for those who were late but gave me a reason
Cinderpaw- Cleaning out the elder's den
Heatherclaw and
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I am sorry :C